This is a rough edit of our groups final piece, I done this on my own we will later do it as a group. This does not have any foley or colour grading. below is a image of me editing the shots together.
A3 Excellent editing to tell the story with attention to detail in continuity which is seamless across most edits. The slow motion is appropriate on the coffee drop - try a Trails effect like on Abbeys on his drop. Colour grading is subtle and creates the Thriller look. There is a continuity mistake when he opens his eyes on the long and the cut to the CU. Overall, excellent effort - well done Benn To improve Consider where your titles will go and what foley/soundtrack would be appropriate.
A3
ReplyDeleteExcellent editing to tell the story with attention to detail in continuity which is seamless across most edits. The slow motion is appropriate on the coffee drop - try a Trails effect like on Abbeys on his drop. Colour grading is subtle and creates the Thriller look. There is a continuity mistake when he opens his eyes on the long and the cut to the CU. Overall, excellent effort - well done Benn
To improve
Consider where your titles will go and what foley/soundtrack would be appropriate.